Poetry

[alucard]

one thing i love to do is to write poetry and write stories, i do it almost every day but scrap most of them as i don't know if they are good and am sort of shy about showing my work, so i decided i will post some of the ones that i have kept and may post some more in the future if you like them. i write poetry in many different moods and about many different things, the first one i am posting is actually my first try at it and i would like to know what you guys think thanks everyone ^^

[alucard]

In the Rain
Sitting in the rain,
Staring at the sky
Looking, thinking, wondering
Why, oh, why?
Tears fall, and the clouds cry,
We weep together,
Why can't I die?
Dreaming, dreaming
Of another day
When I was happy,
When it was all okay.
But that time is gone,
That time has past...
I always knew:
It would never last.
I'm living proof
Of eternal pain,
So here I sit,
In the rain.